Tsukihime: More Realistic

The biggest problem with Tsukihime is how unrealistic it is and how Shiki is so weak and doesn't tell us what he wants doesn't take what he wants doesn't know what he wants etc. I am trying to write something more realistic. I hope this will be better than Nasu.

I don't own anything. If anyone wants this story they can claim it, but please first ask me OK?

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